I thoroughly enjoyed this piece. I thought you did a nice job building up the progression of her mental domination by the villains, and continuing the dialogue and interplay between the various characters as things went along. I think the gradual sequence of how the questions went from simple to more probing also adds a lot to the piece, so that the invasion into her psyche becomes more like a caress than a bulldozer (which also adds to the erotic nature of the writing, in my opinion). That presents a certain amount of challenge to the author, I think, since you have to maintain the interplay longer, but I thought you did a good job of keeping it interesting while knowing when to conclude things. Finally, it also slots very nicely into the next piece in the sequence, where we see her after the villains have done their work on her. Well done!